Dear SaaStr: How Do I Write a Great Cold Email To VCs?

If you’re going to cold email SaaStr Fund —or any VC—you need to make it amazing.

A great cold email can absolutely work, and does work. But it has to stand on its own, and sell the deal — on its own.

Here’s how to craft one that gets my attention (and likely others too):

  1. Start with an incredible subject line. The subject line is your first impression. Make it so compelling that I want to open the email immediately. For example, “$1M ARR SaaS Startup Growing 15% MoM—Looking for a Partner” or “We’re the Next Rippling—$500k ARR, 10x YoY Growth.” Be specific and highlight something exceptional about your business.

  2. Get to the point immediately. In the first sentence, tell me why I should care. What’s the one thing that makes your startup stand out? Is it your growth rate, your traction, your team, or your market? For example: “We’re at $2M ARR, growing 10% MoM, and just signed our first Fortune 500 customer.” Don’t bury the lede—hook me right away.

  3. Share your best metrics. VCs love numbers. Include your ARR, growth rate, customer count, churn rate, or any other metric that shows traction. If you’re pre-revenue, focus on user growth, engagement, or other leading indicators. Be transparent and specific.

  4. Explain why you’re going to win. What’s your unique insight or unfair advantage? Maybe it’s your team’s deep domain expertise, a breakthrough product feature, or a massive market opportunity. Make it clear why you’re the one to solve this problem.

  5. Really Personalize it. Show me you’ve done your homework. Reference a tweet, blog post, or investment I’ve made that’s relevant to your pitch. For example: “I saw your post about how Gorgias scaled to $10M ARR with a small team. We’re tackling a similar market with a unique twist.” This shows you’re serious and not just spamming.

  6. Attach a killer deck. Don’t send a teaser deck—send the real thing. Make sure it’s clear, concise, and visually appealing. Include your key metrics, team, market opportunity, and product vision. A great deck can sell your story even before we talk.

  7. End with a clear ask. Be direct about what you want. For example: “We’re raising $2M to scale sales and marketing. Would you be open to a 20-minute call next week to discuss?” Make it easy for me to say yes.  Fundraising is sales.  Make the next step as easy and high value as possible.

Here’s a quick example of what a great cold email might look like:


Subject: $1M ARR SaaS Startup Growing 15% MoM—Looking for a Partner

Hi Jason,

I’m the CEO of [Startup Name], a SaaS platform helping [specific customer segment] solve [specific pain point]. We’re currently at $1M ARR, growing 15% MoM, with a 120% NRR and a 6-month payback period.

We’ve just signed [notable customer] and are seeing strong demand in [specific market]. My co-founder and I have deep experience in [relevant domain], and we believe we’re uniquely positioned to win this $X billion market.

I saw your investment in [similar company] and your post about [relevant topic]. We’re tackling a similar challenge but with a different approach, and I’d love to get your thoughts.

We’re raising $2M to scale sales and marketing. Would you be open to a 20-minute call next week? I’ve attached our deck for more details.

Best,
[Your Name]
[Your Title]
[Your Contact Info]

Even better, here are two actual examples.  Make your cold email as good or better than these:

2 Cold Emails I Funded For Millions

And more here and why many of the best early-stage VCs read and invest in cold emails:

Which VCs Open Cold Emails? Keith Rabois. Aileen Lee. David Sacks. Satya Patel. And More.

 

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